Crazy Old Cat Lady (Read or listen to the story)

in #fiction6 years ago

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Today Mike Mander had received a letter, written on an old fashioned type writer. Someone wanted a book redrawn, they said something about giving cats a bad reputation. "The Dreaming", the book was called. A dystopian story of a world were cats ruled, keeping humans as slaves for food and play.

Some crazy cat person for sure, Mike thought. He crushed the paper and threw it in the bin. It was late, he wanted to go home. The sun was going down.

He usually walked home. It wasn’t very far if he took the short cut though the industrial port. There was an old house on the hill. It always had a light on in one of higher windows. The rest of the house was dark. He wondered who was living there.

He passed through an alley. The garbage was piled up on one side. Leftovers from the fishing industry, that much he could smell. There were cats. Disgusting, dirty port cats, digging into the rotting fish and garbage. They looked up when he arrived. Sat there, watching him. He hated cats.

Coming out on the other side he could see someone in the old house, looking down towards him from the window.

A couple of days later he got another letter. It was strikingly similar to the first but a lot more threatening. "Take the book out of the stores today or we’ll kill you." Hard to misunderstand.

He took it to the police, but they didn’t really seem that interested.

-Don’t worry, the police man said. This happens all the time. We’ll see what we can do, but it’s probably just some kids having fun.

He felt a bit better, and didn’t think much more about it. Though it was the first time it had happened to him, he knew these kind of things occurred in the editorial industry.

I guess I’ll just have to get used to it, he thought.

Some days later he had worked late again, and took the short cut through the docks. There were more cats now. A lot more. Cats everywhere, and they were all looking at him. He started walking faster. Further down the road black cats were coming out from the sides. They blocked the street between the storage house walls. He stopped, turned around. Cats. The whole street was covered with cats.

-Aren’t they beautiful? The voice came from the darkest corner in the alley, behind the containers.

-Who’s there?

-Hahahahaha! Cats… It was the voice of an elderly woman. She didn’t sound too good, her voice was weird and twisted. -The most beautiful creatures in the world. How could anyone ever want to put them down?

-I do not know what you want, Mrs, but could you please tell your cats to let me pass?

Silence.

The cats started jumping down from the containers and the roof. Hundreds of cats staring straight at him in the darkness.

-Such perfect animals. Divine, I’d say.

-Please, lady, I do not know what you… But he did know. The Dreaming. The letters were from her.

The cats moved closer. Slowly, but firmly.

He started walking. He walked into the crowd of cats in front, ploughing his way through the black mass on the ground. The woman was laughing. The cats were hissing, circling him.

One jumped up on his pants, ripping it, climbing up his thigh. He grabbed it, threw it away. Others came. Jumping up from the ground, onto him from the roofs, from the boxes and containers. Cats. Cats everywhere. Crawling all over him, scratching their small, razor sharp claws through his skin. His screams could hardly be heard through the pile of cats covering his body.

The woman walked over.

-That will teach him, won’t it, my sweets. The cats were rubbing themselves to her legs, purring softly. A dark tail followed her up towards the house with light in one window. The rest stayed to finish their meal.

(Illustration, story and voice are all my own, and copyright fictionspawn.com. Please share)

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Thanks for adding the artwork into the story. This is a captivating (yet a little troubling) story, and I enjoyed the read. I found you through the #payitforward contest. You were featured by @bengy. Congratulations. Wish you all the best.

Thank you, and thanks for telling me where you found me, too. The feature seems to have been quite a favour :)

Thanks for the creepy story and the accompanying artwork!

I have featured you and this post in my entry for a curation contest.

https://steemit.com/payitforward/@bengy/pay-it-forward-curation-contest-entry-week-10

Thank you very much!

I found your post thanks to @bengy's entry. Love creepy stories and the illustrations are great.

Thank you! I'll try to get something out most days. A lot of them will be creepy, I promise :D

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i love this :D so nice <3 i loves the description~ the buildup is super nice <3 and the ending is delivered so nicely also <3 <3 <3

thank you for writing and sharing this <3

Thanks a lot! :)

Oh dear! I loved this. I don't like cats anyway. I better watch my back hahaha.

Brilliant and TRAGIC.

Dante is here No fear

Cheers

Haha! You shouldn't speak so loud about that :D Thanks a lot, highly appreciated.

haha loved, When I see your art, I identify myself, it looks a lot like my cats.
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Haha! Let's hope your cats are friendlier than these.... :D Thanks a lot, happy to hear from you!

Woow nicee :)

Thank you! ;)

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As you know @bengy featured you this in this week's Pay It Forward Curation Contest

Your story is amazing. I absolutely love it. You should reach out to @viking-ventures she's a writer also and has been using d-books, not sure if it's an option but something to look into. Keep up your wonderful stories :D

Thank you! I will look into that, sounds interesting. Very happy you liked my story!

Thanks for tagging me, @tryskele!

Yeah, this story is fun in that creepy sort of way. Thankfully, I don't do horror, lol. Not even about nasty cats (though I am a cat person, lol... most animals seem to like me, actually.)

I've been getting along very well with dbooks, though I'm having to do some hand-coding to make LibreOffice get along with Dbooks... I think it was initially designed with Word, so if you're using that it should work just fine if you paste into Dbooks' editor. But it's the first online book publishing platform to mesh with Steemit with the same model. None of the other online book publishing platforms are quite like it - either they don't pay or they want you to submit your work to be looked at by another human - not great when you're trying to get work done your own way!

I love the fact that you're doing the videos to go along with you story! That's something I should do, but then, I'm a little camera/voice shy... not sure if I can manage to do that for an entire novella!

Anyway, I'm so glad that @bengy found you and featured you. The Pay It Forward contest is simply awesome!

I figured you might be able provide some expertise :D I'll keep it mind though...no horror stories for @viking-ventures ...got it :D

You're welcome @fictionspawn. I read just about anything as long as I can stay interested. Your caught me from the start. I think if I get time at work tonight...I'll share your audible version with my coworker :)

The closest I come to horror is * Supernatural* - but because it's paranormal, I put up with the horror for the interesting bits.

Despite that, I'm still interested in continuing this Crazy Old Cat Lady book - at least for awhile.

I'm actually working alongside Dbooks at the moment - giving them suggestions and things like that. I may end up doing some of their Steemit work for them, but we'll see...

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