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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #38 - The Taste of Chicken (SCI-FI)
HaHa!! Cool & manly!
Great, that you spoiled the sport and not let me read the final fight! I love it!
As I am in a silly mood, I'd also like to have 19-B even stumbled around a bit more, being clumsy. ... But don't listen to me.
What I actually wanted to say: I really like what you've done with the story. A clear, unvarnished and direct thing. Thumbs up! And surprisingly you built in this schizophrenic self talk at the same time. Now, how did you do that??
;-)