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RE: Short story | σχίζειν φρήν

in #fiction6 years ago (edited)

Oh c'mon guys this is not that hard

First we have a vivid depiction of the ordinary life of a couple, just a morning like any other, coffee and love is in the air

In contrast, comes a discussion, not everything is at it seems, life is complicated after all, but we'll do our best right?

But what is this a rude awakening, the worst is happening separation anguish and pain, solitude and darkness

But the worst is just gonna get worst..er, an enclosure, with plain walls and a guardian at the door bringing a modern pacifier... THE PLOT TWIST IS INCOMING! Our dear protagonist is tormented by demons deep inside the mind, love and life, all an ilussion, but what cause it?

σχίζειν (schizein) φρήν (phrēn)

That my friends

And that's why I love you and your short stories, they are condenced but built perfectly, masterpiece <3

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