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RE: Writing Prompts (Week 2) - Swiped Right [Short Story]

in #fiction6 years ago

Nice pace to it. Firemen get laid quite easily. Anime is popular so, I didn't find it particularly believable. Overall I enjoyed it. Strong dialogue, which is tough to do and tends to keep me engaged.

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Thank you @cosimo

Glad you enjoyed the pacing here which I've been working on overall in my writing.

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