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RE: Glade's Edge: Part II - Swords of St Valentine
“I learned lessons from people I never wanted to know. One was that I should have avoided them. In truth Eloise, my gut tells me you are too naive to avoid trouble and anyone close will have to sacrifice to save you from it . . . Or you are a pretty trap.”
Oooh!
Love it!
You've mastered the classic elements of Pulp Fiction.
And So young!
It does read like a noir detective story without a gumshoe. It has the femme fatale showing up to enlist help on a "case". She could be an honest victim or part of an elaborate trap!