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RE: [Short Story] Wade Into The Water With Me (part 1)

in #fiction • 8 years ago

YES -- now you're employing Deep POV, or you're close to doing so, and I love it: But he didn’t mind her walking up to him like that, the five other guys standing around, and she acting like it's just them two.

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