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RE: [Short Story] Wade Into The Water With Me (part 1)
This is a good kind of telling: *A sprightly creek separated the field from the deep of the woods. The water was clear and cool with a bottom of smooth, flat stones, but it was shallow, only about 10 inches deep. Far as he could tell, they planned to divert a little channel from the river to a pit. *