I enjoyed this!
There are a couple spelling errors, misplaced commas, and a verb tense that a good online editor can catch for you. I'd suggest Grammarly. I make the same mistakes and much more often than you! You have an amazing talent, my friend!
You will do well here.
CARRY ON!
Thank you @beekerst
I appreciate it, and the direction toward Grammerly. I will certainly use it, many thanks!