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RE: The mistake of Jack - Chapter 11 [Final]- FICTION
He had no way out, his life was f,,,ed. He was accused, did not matter that he may not have done it, he had an affair in the past and that's all anyone was going to care about, his wife, his boss, the court system. He was set up, and screwed blue, no way out. No life left. He was a man that screwed around on his wife once, so he was guilty of any accusations for the rest of his life. Good ending.
Well said @bashadow, that was the mistake of Jack.
Thank you so much for reading =)
It was a very enjoyable read. Here on steemit, my reading repertoire, is expanding. I would most likely not have looked to hard at your story if I had a choice between buying it or buying a steam punk/demons type novel. My few dollars would have gone on the steampunk novel. But here on steemit, I am not limited money wise, I can read so many different stories that in the past I would have had to walk by. Now if steemit ever goes away and I have to chose, I honestly can not say which i would bye. So thank you for broadening my reading horizons.
Punk/Demon...haha. A good thing then you chose to read on Steemit as you wouldn't find any Punk/Demon stories in my mind. Lol
Yes, but as good a writer as you are, you might be able to do a steampunk novel. Take jack have him come back as a vengeful demon like jack the Ripper night rider to the rescue of broken men and women from home wreckers. But nevermind that, you had a nice story there it was very enjoyable to read, and I thought it was well done. Thank you for deciding to share it with us.
Lol, that sounds like a cool story! I just can't think of that many crap...yet! Maybe one day, hehe!
