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RE: Diary of a Detectress – Episode 13 – Life, death and disablement
@victoria-kelly you are a FANTASTIC writer!
I'm so impressed by this. The writing is so damn detailed and realistic.
He reaches across the table and grabs my wrist, staring into my eyes with a grim expression. Tingles of electricity run along my skin and my heart rate spikes.
It really paints a clear picture in my mind's eye as I read.
You've really got a gift here Victoria. Well done :)
And for whatever reason, my upvote just isn't loading. I'll be sure to upvote your comment here (hopefully that works!)
Thanks! Made MY evening. :)