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RE: Writing Prompts (Week 2) - Swiped Right [Short Story]
The ending was hilarious. I really didn't see it coming and I was already feeling so sorry for Zoe.😀
Now, I can't believe that Brad went through all of that in order to get someone, no, a lady to watch anime with him. He is totally crazy and super funny too, I would say. Ah, I can't imagine the look on Zoe's face, reluctantly watching the anime.
I love the funny twist of this story. Your story draws someone in, gets their attention and then surprise them. You are such an incredible writer.
Thank you for reading and the lovely compliments @audreybits
I contemplated that ending quite a bit and it just seemed the right fit as far as something a bit unexpected and fun :)