Twilight
The blurry figure of a man
Whose face I couldn't figure
Yet why is my heart had a hard time to endure
This feeling of emptiness that is undone
Each time I tried to forget
I usually end up teary-eyed and hurt
Not because I fail in anything
But because I know something is lacking
You wanna ask why I felt this way?
I don't really know just maybe
Maybe I need to know how it feels to have a father
Who will surely guard and secure you ever
"Twilight Time" is a simple song
That makes me think and made me wonder
The only memory I had which reminds me of him
But memories don't really replace the pain
I know because everytime I saw a complete family
I would be wishing for my father to just be in my dream
So he could let me know just how he feels
Please take this as a well meant constructive tip: Some of your sentences are a bit hard to read since they are so long. Splitting them into shorter pieces would greatly improve readability.
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