All I was trying to do is suggest a way to make your post more interesting - which is why I bothered to provide examples. After all, the more you interest your viewer, the more likely it is they will return - plus upvote you of course.

I was not suggesting you are not free to present your post in any way you see fit. That is the fun of being on Steemit, but I have seen so many posters forget the rules every good journalist uses and though some of them had interesting ideas, they lost heart and stopped posting because they complained that nobody looks at posts of newbies.

When I first came here the page would also show how many views have occurred. To me this was crucial, as it helped guide me. As it stands now, you could have a hundred views and no comments or upvotes and think you had nobody viewing your post. If nobody looks, you can re-examine your titling...if you have views but you get no reaction, you know you must re-examine the way you present your post.

Since the help/guide for posters no longer exists, I try to comment when I do not upvote for some reason - despite the subject being interesting. How you accept my comment is of course entirely up to you.

Although Steemit tries to encourage us to help the newer posters, I'm starting to think most do not want any advice and I should stop. That is my advice to myself - and obviously your advice to me, also.

I thank you and wish you all the best on Steemit.