This was heavily improvised, I have a much more structured and defined version @primatives-usa perfom (the introduction is completely different, also), and we will do a polished recorded version soon.
When I sit and consciously write, upon reading through, I usually feel most of what I've written to be contrived, and, while perhaps clever, less than transparent to my heart's desire- this waltz (and it is a waltz, intentionally broken, my only a posteriori contrivance to support the lyric) was certainly NOT intentional, but received through inspiration. Although the lyric was written a few weeks after the music (I dimly remember), they were very spontaneous, and I'd realized several verses were simply restatements of the translation of several of the Siksastakam, so I cut them in favor of including the single Sanskrit verse. I felt it much more honest and direct.
I'm delighted something like this can reach appreciative ears- but not surprised you're the first to react, having listened to your postings (with great admiration and enjoyment)
Have a blessedly beautiful day.