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RE: A PHANTASMIC ADVERSARY Poetry Slam Contest [Week #27] | (An Originally Spoken Poetry)

in #dsound6 years ago

Loving this poem @josediccus. I also entered scuzzy slam this week last minute ;-) It seems like we have tackled similar subject matter my friend. I too would like to highlight these lines as a great metaphor for the battle against the inner critic.

Fiction is a fact
battling beasts without flesh
a figment of our anxiety

Also, loved these images:

abstract beelzebub lurking

ethreal foes
entities without arms or toes
hurling spears at nemesis within

Nice work!

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Hahaha you entered too? Wow well I love @scuzzy's contest and it help me prunes my ideas and concept and also help me learn how to work within a theme really.

Yeah thank you for highlighting those feets my friend, I was thinking the metaphors are not enough to convey my points, but,

Thank you so much my friend, I'll like to see your entry as well.

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