Whaaaaaaat sweet I mean how about the voice? That was amazing, I mean
The personification of emptiness and befriending it like a lover was a banger, I mean this piece by all means is quite self relative, because I felt every groove of it, moving in my veins.
You've really graduated well with Dsound poetry, and it's all amazing my friend, this one is 200% top notch.
I could feel your rhythm, it's much of a free verse but I still felt it,
Baritone voice in the glade