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RE: The Little Voice - Bringing a Light to the Word
I enjoyed the poem, each time I read it I saw a bit more meaning, my favourite part is the long shadow and my little moment of aha that is clever.
I feel the slip of the lucid moment ease itself out as the layers upon layers reveal themselves.
We need to go into the forest and learn the paths, make our own before we call it home. Some go willingly others get lured then a moment of clarity can still save you if only to show lines blurred.
I am seeing more and more poetry in your words, @penderis. I think they have possibly always been there but now I see the path has opened and maybe, just maybe, I'm willingly stepping in. Or am I being lured? Either way, I like the clarity of words against the blurred lines on the white page.
poetry in my words haha, I probably read a @free-reign spigot before commenting. Fair enough on the words and the stories they form. The characters show clarity when in a predicament and although what is to follow needs to still unfold, the next step is clear as daylight.
I enjoy your writing a lot... Maybe you influence my approach and not as I first stated.