You combined both skills in your post, the skills of teller, like in old time the children would ask such a person to tell a story and they just start and go ahead with adventures and interesting characters so that the kids sit on the floor around with sparkling eyes and quite like mice just wondering of it is a truth. Another great skill is to capture your story on paper with the details and similarity to the story. You work has so much small details you do not really see them at once but while telling hte story and mentioning a certain moment you thankfully put appropriate part of hte drawing in it. I like it very much. Really enjoyed both your story and drawing :)