Those words are pretty intense. It’s sad that anyone would have to experience that — not that they aren’t common feelings. I also enjoyed the way that you spoke/read the words. I couldn’t help but notice that you slightly changed some of the words or the order of some when reading. Which I’ve noticed people tend to do and it makes it seem more real, in my opinion.
Am i excited that you listened to the poem? Yes!!!
Thank you for your review and kind words.