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RE: Sci-fi Short: Jump Start - Part 9
Okay, that twist is one that I should have seen coming based on the premise of the story but your writing disguised it so well that it was excellent. Bravo!
"End of line." This one I knew was coming, you know too much and you get killed in an industry willing to do this. Very realistic writing.
Another excellent series!
~ Mako
Thank you! I would have liked to spin it out a bit more and add a few more turns. However it was meant to be short! T'was a big challenge writing this one, so glad you liked it :-)
Cg