I want you to comment, edit, add, subtract, to this and all of our documents, if I’ve asked you to look this over, my expectations are somewhat high for your involvement and that starts immediately if you are up to working on this collective vision together

Clearly VERY, unrealistically high, given the amount of time and energy I bothered to invest only lived up to "half-assed" in your eyes.

good luck with your idea. you'll need it, with your current strategy and communication approach. ✌️

p.s. apologies for the miscommunications generated through the split conversations between here and Facebook. had the entire dialogue been kept to one platform or another, there would have been less misunderstanding as parts of my comments here may seem out of context and confusing due to parts missing from the FB side.

And thank you for the wealth of lessons. :-)