Wow! Coming out of the gate with a bang for the NOIA network reviews. I think you did a fantastic job. ReSteemed!
One thing I noticed that I think is a bit challenging from a reading perspective as well as visually is the repeating of NOIA with the link inserted. When writing anything, particularly a review it's understood that we are reading about a particular topic. Now if you sourced different parts of the website with each link that's a little different but you don't have to repeat NOIA so often. I am not trying to be mean here, I am just trying to give you a tip to write a bit more professional review that will get us as a group great attention.

I think you did a great job otherwise. You had good separation of paragraphs and thoughts, great images and organization as well as included lots of information such as the folks behind the project. I did get some ideas for my review while reading yours so thank you!