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RE: Friday Poets, Round 11, Contest and Community Building
Hi, @prydefoltz and other steemit friends in poetry... This is my strange contribution to our weekly meeting:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@yomismosoy/i-am-a-man-my-disappointed-and-coffee-addicted-contribution-to-enjoy-a-poetryweekend-with-prydefoltz-and-friends-bilingual
Apparently ludic, your poem contains a deep reflection. It speaks of a life of suffering from hard blows during the trip. The voice suggests the tragedy of living without incentives. I perceive cynicism when it refers to what he had to live. Talk about the intellectual preparation, the struggle, the way traveled, but with bad luck. Something changed its course and now it became frustrating, lonely.
You communicate a lot with your writing, @yomismosoy. You are very talented. Blessings for your creative art.
Among the pleasures of life is drinking a hot coffee slowly. I enjoy its smell and taste with closed eyes. How exquisite!
Hardship is overwhelming:
Sometimes we're a street mongrel which thinks itself a man, or a man who thinks himself better than the street mongrel. Sometimes life is just a stunned space among the dogs.
This poem is pure effect, @yomismosoy. Good!