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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #24: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

It felt like the world had fallen apart, Kike didn't know what to do. Mark had been the love of her life, she trusted him and would have done anything for him. As she drove to work, the events of the last two week came flashing back. She had tried to reach her cousin Bisi on phone, but she wasn't picking up, this was unlike her, Bisi always picked up her calls. All morning Kike tried calling but couldn't get across to her cousin. As the minutes passed, fear began embracing her gradually, "I think something is wrong", she thought. She got her keys and drove to her cousin's apartment, she got there to find her boyfriend pants down with her cousin. She was devastated. "What did she do to deserve this" she lamented

In her grieving moments, Max, her neighbor was the one nursing her. He had been in love with her since she moved in and he vowed to himself to bring back her joy. Even though Kike lost her relationship with Mark, all was not lost. True love loomed in the neighborhood, when one door closes, a larger one is opened

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Really touching story you have here

I can totally relate to this story

Thank you

learning not to trust people, especially the ones who have the power to hurt one thing I've learnt.

this one's a really good story

her cousin is a traitor, a real backstabbing bitch

This is a picture of what happens in the real world

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