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RE: Friday Poets, Round 10, Contest and Community Building

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Strike! But I sense that your rich poetry is headed towards philosophy. Criticizes the exacerbated materialism, living to pretend. I felt something like: "although she dresses in silk, mona stays", the paradox of the person who lives of appearances weaves a spider's web that in the end always breaks its seams and reveals what is inside in the dark.
I go through the threads and say: Ahhh ...!
¡Excellent, Pryde!

The “no placebo diet” was funny. What a vivid imagination. Great way to breathe life and death into a spider. Great Job.

This week flew.

Hi, @prydefoltz

Here's my comment on your post. Loved the twist at the end ♥

Some of The Matrix is left in the far reaches of my memory.
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I want to say many things, but I'll summarize them into one: Who said we have to choose between the blue and red pills and swallow?
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keep your red pills
and blue ones too
I’m on a no placebo diet
they give me nightmares
and day terrors, flatulence
itches and chills
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Yes, ma'am!
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Brave write, @prydefoltz! It shouts determination.

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