You know, the last line of your haiku is just brilliant, I don't know if it was intended, but using short one-syllable words feel like a squirrel making its litle noises ))) ahaha
OMG!!! hhahahahaha. It was totally an unconscious choice. It just kinda came out that way. Thanks for pointing that out :) I agree, and thats awesome! Cheers @liverussian!
Seeing the squirrels walking and eating is a spectacle. Light up our eyes.
Damn. That's a good one @corderosiete!! :) #onpoint
Clever:)
Tyvm @prydefoltz :)
You know, the last line of your haiku is just brilliant, I don't know if it was intended, but using short one-syllable words feel like a squirrel making its litle noises ))) ahaha
OMG!!! hhahahahaha. It was totally an unconscious choice. It just kinda came out that way. Thanks for pointing that out :) I agree, and thats awesome! Cheers @liverussian!
your heart was leading you the right way - the heart of a poet!
Ty :)