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RE: A Dead Poems Society Production, Round 4, Contest and Community Building
I really liked how you used the imagery of tiny birds to represent the feeling of being abused, small and helpless. The bird will never fly again and neither will the child and his mother. Your english is pretty good.
You should #steemitschool discord server. They have a poetry class.
Thank you for your kind words, @firststeps, especially when it comes to my use of the language. I read the "poem" once more and realized that I missed a verb that should have been written in past tense jajajaja I'll be looking forward to joining the discord server you mentioned, sounds interesting!