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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #14

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

"Your tripping dawg." Sharon's pet Weather Bug explained to her. She glanced over to her shoulder, just to see her weather bug staring at her with a cold, blank, and emotion-less stare that only a bug could accomplish. Her pet bug then further explained, "You've been running around this water fountain in circles and all this brand new potting soil is all over the place! Please stop, I am really dizzy!" Sharon never had her Weather Bug do anything but somehow predict the weather accurately. Why now? Her pet Weather Bug always was so bland, sterile and predictable up until now. What exactly was happening, she didn't know.

Nothing was making sense. Was she running in circles around this fountain or was her bug lying to her. That's when she realized that she was so stressed that she forgot where she was and it was amazing how she now felt. Her Weather bug had now become her own personal Yoda, the potting soil had become a magical black fog while the fountain was transformed into a vast pond. Truly her bad day had sent her into such a delusional state that she found bliss in front of the local elementary school's water fountain, that was dedicated to an innocent victim of a drunk driver.

Sharron then looked over at the forest across the pond. There were no more clouds and now ample sun. A clear image of a mountain emerged. That's when Sharon thought out loud "I better stop running in circles and tackle that mountain!"


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In the end, this is my favorite one for this round! It's simple, but effective!

This was a fun ending. Good luck in today's contest. 👏

@dynamicgreentk in the house! Man, I think that this is your best one so far.

Her Weather bug had now become her own personal Yoda

This cracked me up and I started laughing in my office like an idiot.

That's when Sharon thought out loud "I better stop running in circles and tackle that mountain!"

This is a clever way to leave a deep message in the shape of a story. That's the way!

Very original! I didn't expect the nervous breakdown

Week #15 is out and waiting for you, the earliest you post the better!

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