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RE: PAPA-PEPPER'S WILD & STRANGE CONTEST SEASON 15 - ROUND 4 - POETRY

in #contest6 years ago (edited)

Shadowing me from the reality of life
I don my mask and put on my fins
Stopping to grab my fish knife
You never know
But never fear
I can hear the whispers of change in the tide
But
Not the fact that I cannot breathe without you
When I don't find a whale of an upvote

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(¸.•´♥ (¸.•´ ♥

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LOL - I love it! So far, you're in the lead!

Haha.... At least there was a point that I was leading the pack! Thanks for the generous tip. :)

PS - the third requirement states this:

The poem must rhyme in some way.

Not sure if yours would qualify...FYI
You've got a week to tweak it though.

I saw that and mine did rhyme, in my head. But upon reading it again I realize that it needs more than tweaking. I'll get right on it and thank you for the heads up.

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