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RE: Constrained Writing Contest #33 - The Hive - Part 3: Shameless
Absolutely love this story!
Useless eaters
So dark, yet so true. Ugh. You have a way with words, you do.
But did you really have to kick the dogs? :| haha :D
The only problem I'm having is - seeing as you chose rage as the emotion in question - is the person administering these doses of the virus and in control of the nanomosquitoes also driven by rage?
Nevertheless, you're still creating a world of rage-only. :D
Thank you very much for your entry! And sorry I'm so late to reply!
The emotion I chose is actually shaming. With no shame, the hive members work to deplete the population to 500 million by 2040. However, the BED virus makes people crazy with rage. So I guess I cheated and used 2 emototions.
But the worlds were separate, one with one emotion, the other with the other. I guess you found a loophole! :P
I am all about loop holes!