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     7 years ago 

    wouldn't find a work to do.

    we all know the two of them has had a shop where they run there their trade

    for she knew I used to check on my friends before school

    To date I still wonder till date how some mathematical formulae were made.

    This is just a few... The structure of your sentences is actually quite.... odd.
    Mainly because your sentences are made too long. Use fullstops instead of commas more, unless you're really really really describing something.

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       7 years ago 

      Thanks, I'll put this into consideration.

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