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RE: Walking up a hill and back down
Ah good day my good friend @d-pend,
Step after step.
Slope upon slope.
Ache under ache,
I unembroil myself.
I unencumber something.
I unelongate the symbols
Your frequent use of , the letter s. Is an alliteration makes your poem rhythmic and sweet.
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Good day @josediccus! I appreciate your feedback, wholeness!