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RE: One Too Many

in #conflictprompt7 years ago

Powerful!
Masterful use of Deep POV (point of view, for non-fictioneering readers)
The narrator keeps me guessing: should we trust him, or the wife who says he embarassed her with his drunken jealous antics...
In the end, I feel for him.
You really pack a lot, like a poet, into a minimal number of words.
Well done!

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She is a poet, for sure..... the first thing I ever read of hers was an amazing poem

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