Hmm, well, I think at least the balloons are significantly better in the later two options, no? The original uses WildWords, which I used for Lesbian Zombies, so I kind of wanted to change things up. Option #2, I thought, maybe gave it a bit of a "aged" look. However, clarity is the most important thing. (#1 is Anime 2 by Blambot, #2 is Adam Warren pro, free font on another site.)

How about this one (also added some SFX):

Actually, I'll post this above, so it's not so small.

This uses BackIssue by Blambot.