Comedy Open Mic - Round 44 | 1ra entry (The dancer)
Greetings comedians!
here my 1st entry for the #comedyopenmic I hope you enjoy it
begins the story of a young man named Bernim
'bernim' was 16 years old and comes from a very low income and humble family
Due to economic situations, he did not return to school and decided to work to help his family
He liked dancing a lot and his dream was to be an urban dancer and open a dance school where all the people in the street would come together and stay away from drugs and reduce crime.
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"bernim" spent more time on the street selling sweets
while he was working he watches some guys elaborate dance practices he just approached to observe moved and imperactive to see what he really likes he began to dance I see a director of an academy called
"" FRANK '"
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frank was impressed he approached and asked him to join his dance group
that they were preparing for a very important championship where if they achieved the 1st place their lives could completely and would stop being on the streets selling sweets to a comfortable life with their family.
Bernim told him:
I really appreciate it, I would like to join your dance group but I have to work to be able to absorb the home and all this is dedicated time friend
FRANK answered:
I understand friend but this would be a great opotunity to make your dreams come true
all of us here are from the street and we work just like you, but that does not stop us from fighting for our dreams and doing what we really love dancing
think it over and give me an answer soon do not miss this great opportunity
'Bernim' went home to spend the whole night thinking about the proposal that had made Frank just imagined that doing what he would do great and frank was the piece for the momentum of his career as a dancer
the next day it was to accept the frank proposal
But when 'bernim' arrives Frank was meeting with lawyers when he left the meeting and looked at bernim he felt happy but at the same time worried
I call his dance group to inform him that the place where they prepared their training
I was 6 months behind in that way the bank would take it off if they did not pay the mortgage
All of them dismissed because they considered that place their second home
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FRANK said:
good guys the only way to save and keep the place with us is to win the competition next week and pay the debt to go to work very hard to get that 1st place
The motivated boys started the strong routine and trained every day
the big day of the competition came, everyone was nervous
'bernim' even more for the first time was at an important event
where featured professional dancers were
the battle began
after aver won they managed to obtain the local and bernim is the right hand of frank and do contracts and important events where they earn a lot of money, Help the people of the street and integrates them in the academy so that children do not take vices and be better people in the future ...
(MESSAGE)
This story allows us to visualize our goals and dreams that despite the adversities we can continue regardless of where we come from, or what race you are, what matters is to have faith in yourself. To get big, you have to risk the one that does not risk, does not earn with effort and dedication of granite in granite, we will get very far without losing faith
Never let anyone tell you that you can not do something. Not even me. If you have a dream, you have to protect it. People who are not able to do something for themselves will tell you that you can not do it either. Want something? Go for it, period. "
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