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RE: ColorChallenge: FridaySkyBlue - "Blue Skies" [9MinuteFreeWrite]
That nurse, whatever her name is, is certainly a nice fresh breath in this tale-- it's hard not to like her. If your timer went off right here, I would consider this a happy ending, except that there is now a "plan", and now I see that part 6 is up! In this one, I looked for the blue reference, but must have missed it? So far I've seen the day's color show up in a few of these so far, but I suppose in improv we can't really expect to write particular things, especially with the timer ticking away.
Ach! I really don't know why my reply for this didn't send before! I couldn't remember it now, too. By now you already know that the color references aren't what it seems. For this one, the "blue skies" reference is metaphorical, seeing how VI provided some much needed reprieve to an otherwise dull day for XJ. It's great that you noted how VI was a breath of fresh air, because that's exactly her purpose. At least for this part of the tale ;) I really don't know why I'm winking. By this time you already know the ending haha!
Ok I see that clearly now, the blue sky, and yes the tale might have been dreary without the carefree nurse and her uplifting spirit.
Woohoo! I'm glad you see it that way! I was afraid it would just come out as an excuse that I thought of after haha!