Yes, you're on point there, man! Great sentiment. Hmm I don't think so, but I never really got to edit this one, given the 7-minute restriction. I didn't want to go back and edit after the allotted time. I'm often to caught up in nitpicking things, that it's rare I just leave something so raw. I think that's what's different about this series from most of my writing.

Thanks for taking the time to read, man. I appreciate you being caught up with the series and for sharing your thoughts all the way! I have just scheduled the last installment to post a few hours from now. I hope the ending doesn't disappoint :S