Gabrielle du Noir y poesía #3steemCreated with Sketch.

in #cervantes6 years ago (edited)

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Hola! espero que estén bien. Mucho de ustedes han sentido lo que es la pérdida, desde algo tan efímero como unos audífonos hasta un ser querido... ¿Pero y si fuera una mascota?

Esto lo escribí frustrada al no saber como salvar a un pequeño perrito de una camada...

Sin mas que decir espero que les guste el poema, que aunque odie la prosa (no pienso que sea mala solo que estéticamente no me gusta el sonar al leer) terminé rimando estos versos.

Requiem a un pequeño por Gabrielle du Noir

Hay una vida que

es libérrima, hay una

vida que no atisba

el sol.

Una vida que

vale cada alhaja

por una que no.

Mi blog: Ataraxia sin sentido Wordpress

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Es una pena no haber podido salvar al perrito. Sentimiento bien representado en los versos.

gracias por comentar, y sí, hicimos lo que pudimos pero su estado era grave y el muy pequeño (nunca abrió los ojos)

Qué triste. Es mejor pensar que no era para este mundo.

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