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RE: "Elohibaluk" short version of the truth about our past...!!
Are you sure you are writing fiction and not history? Just a joke.
It's a good idea for a graphic novel. I like Von Helsing for the name of the scientist (isn't that the name of a vampire slayer?).
Oh, I think you want to write "knew" as the past to "know" not "new" (the opposite of old). Good luck in getting the "project" done.
hi, thanks for the comment, the story is fiction, but the fiction happened in our history, all we know today about history is a fiction, told by the winners..... my story is the story of our world and how it became the world as we know it, the only thing different is that there is an immortal cro-magnon walking around. and he playes a vital role in our history, we only do not know that, it is not in our history-books...
You're right about "all we know today about history is a fiction, told by the winners." Definitely true after WWII, true about the genocide of settler-colonialism in the New World (the Indigenous populations had to succumb to the inevitable victory of modernism - or some such bullshit), etc.
I like the twist with the immortal cro-magnon walking around. That's not so fictional either considering Homo Sapiens outside of Africa contain 3-5%(?) of Neanderthal DNA.
Good luck with your story. I really like the artwork. By the way, if you get a little time, I hope you drop by my blog and read a chapter or two from one of my novels I have uploaded on Steemit. I'd love some feedback on whether it's readable or not. The title is: Wackos to Obliterate.