POEM: LOVE & BOREDOM
I return to a place
To find a part
Of love buried
Like the errands
I did last month
As hard as I try to reach
Love remains stuck
What in me cares
To dig it out?
What makes me move
These stones?
It is the void
Love had left
That chills my bones
I reach and even though
Love can’t move
and inch towards me
Every time I shift closer
Warmth serenades my skin
I am one over x
I am the spinning horn
These finite words you give
Present infinite boredom
I spin around the earth
Spinning around the sun
Each time I hear you
I pass no more or less undone
You give words
For you and your kind
When I want to be known
Like a monks prayers peel time
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They sure reflect true soul and wise words buddy !
Excellent poem very beautifully written loved your poem :)
it's a great & excellent poetry. keep it up . @rubenalexander
Very nice poetry. Your emotion was felt as it jumped off my screen and into my heart. Thanks for sharing.
I spin around the earth
Spinning around the sun
Each time I hear you
I pass no more or less undone
these lines are much beatifull and awesome man your poems are som awesome
thats great and really a beautifull poem
i think the trure love cannot move from us in every condition and every time @rubenalexander
Very nice poem. This is a form of art that makes you think. What was the artist thinking about when writing the verses? What were they feeling?
I feel the images complement the words very well. They give you a place to go while reading the works. You can close your eyes and imaging yourself there.
Thanks for sharing!
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Love that last line. That’s a great ending that leaves the reader thinking. Is it peeling as in bit by bit of time falling away?