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RE: Back to Work with a New Focus - 6
I read the edited version that was enough for me. Oh my, how scary.
Reading some parts of the unedited (okay I couldn't resist) I can see the difference. The 1st version is more visceral and in the moment for me.
edited: I mean the 1st version in the post (the edited) is more visceral and in the moment. :)