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RE: Editing - the harsh reality part 2
Your edits are much more succinct without taking away from your original thought. The last sentence is a major overhaul and reads much better. Well done! :)
Your edits are much more succinct without taking away from your original thought. The last sentence is a major overhaul and reads much better. Well done! :)
Thank you. I liked it too.