RE: 1st Chapter: THE POWER OF UPVOTE
I did see your response to @elsiekjay, when you have time, you should edit your post and clean up the formatting, formatting is one of the things that people see first, a lot of people will just pass by poorly formatted content because it is to difficult to read. And it is very important to put that source link to any images you use. That should also be fixed in an edit.
If you can make the post look a little more professionally done I will be happy to resteem it, however in it's current condition, I am not willing to. Perception by people is 90% of winning, the dress for success mentality is still out there and a thing that people have a hard time ignoring. Who appears more successful, a guy in a suit and tie, or a bum, a woman in a nice dress, or a woman dressed like a hooker. People still judge books by the cover.
Done changing them both. How do you think they are now? Formatting is part of my translation job that's why i am used to it, but i am taking your advice in here. I am glad that you are showing what's not going well. That is exactly what i want to hear. I perfectly understand what you want to say. Can you please review it again, and tell me if it's ok or still missing something?
A pretty long blurb of words, but better than it was, just need to break it up into smaller chunks.
you have. For example here is where I would put one break start "For example" as a new paragraph with a line break.
The next line break I would do is here you are wrong. Another great chance start 'Another great... on a new line.
Next place **in a comment. To be honest i ** start To be on a new line.
last line system better. Thank you start Thank you on a new line.
The blank line makes it a little easier on the readers eyes, and helps prevent them missing something. I know it kind of sounds kind of petty, but if you take a screenshot, then make the changes and compare the two, I think you will see how much easier the blank line one is easier to read. Or just imagine if everything I just typed had no line breaks how hard it would be to read.
Most people try to go with three or four sentences at most in a paragraph when presenting things on line, it just makes it so much easier to read.
I followed all of your instructions. What do you think about bullets, for example:
Is that a good thing to have on important topics? Its great getting so much help. To be honest this is my first blog, so i do believe i have tons of stuff to learn on every post i make. And that is one of the reasons i ask for comments.
Thank you so much for your walkthrough. I will surely be more careful on comments and even posts from now on. Have a great week ahead.
From @triplef
I actually like the use of bullets for pointing out short list and highlighting points or areas, it helps to also break up the monotony of a blog post, and they provide a natural indent to add to the highlighting of the information.
You still need a carrier return to make the line break to insert a blank line. Or you could use the
<p>code at the end of each paragraph to insert a line. a couple of different ways to get a blank line.highlighting of the information.<p> You still need a carrier return to make the line break to insert a blankDo you see the difference? The stuff in the highlighted section is how it looks with the code and no blank line.Got to go and eat. Will stop back later.
Thanks a lot for helping. Enjoy your meal.