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RE: Bounty #04: Creative Writing
Ok, I've been working long and hard on the story and during the editing process I removed any unnecessarily boring bits until I uncovered the diamonds... [Enjoy]
...and he died
THE END.
(A rush of Adrenaline is really unpredictable)
[I hope you liked it]
I think you made a fundamental mistake.
Jack Steel can't die. He is Chuck Norris's brother from another mother.
Jack Steel
Is that really the same person? ;)
Besides, Adrenaline in the wrong moment and too big quantity can really be lethal ...