Feedback requested for "Steem At A Glance" slide
I created this a couple years ago as a tool for introducing people to the Steem blockchain, and I've updated it a couple times since then. I just made another update today because I'm going to a local professional networking event later this week, and I thought maybe I'd bring it along with me as a handout. Any constructive criticism?
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Steve Palmer is an IT professional with three decades of professional experience in data communications and information systems. He holds a bachelor's degree in mathematics, a master's degree in computer science, and a master's degree in information systems and technology management. He has been awarded 3 US patents.
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I think that you need to ask yourself first who is the target audience. People who are somewhat familiar with crypto probably need more specific info like block times, consensus algorithim, etc. If the target are businesses you need to highlight what advantages it has for their needs. I think the slide focuses too much on the rewards side.
Thanks for the feedback! I was out of pocket with some family activities yesterday and after I posted on Monday, so I'll have to hold off and make some revisions to it before next week.
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