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RE: Bitshares — New website update (Part 7)
As noted by @apasia.tech we can help, as we seek mutual support for our Bitshares activity in Thailand.
Taking a look now, I can see the following:
This sentence is far too long for readability and SEO. As a suggestion only, I’ve tried breaking it into 3:
Current:
"BitShares is a technology supported by next generation entrepreneurs, investors, and developers with a common interest in finding free market solutions by leveraging the power of globally decentralized consensus and decision making.
Suggested:
BitShares is a technology supported by next generation entrepreneurs, investors, and developers. All have a common interest in finding free market solutions. BitShares delivers by leveraging the power of globally decentralized consensus and decision-making.
Good suggestion. I have just updated the website with the new wording. Thanks!!!