@underground thanks a million your a gentleman and a scholar
@wandrnrose7 so what do you think of my poem? It's my first and it took 30 minutes of playing with the words, I really enjoy trying to create humour and meaning with the least words possible. When I am at work or helping out some, of the others, I often say "sorry for the long email, I did not have time to write a short one". I think this is the essence of poetry every word means more because there are less words. Meaning their professional writing standard increases because the words are thoughtful and considered... btw my work is in engineering, law and business, so poetry isnt what I right every day haha.
Anyway what do I know, its my first attempt... feel free to pass comment.