Hi, I know maybe it will disturb you this comment but myself I got a lot of help during my journey on Steemit world and I hope you will feel like receiving good suggestions. I loved your post but if the pic is from internet, you need to make sure you can use it and put the source of the link underneath for ex [Image Source] (www.google.com) and u need to erase the space between the square and the circle paranthesis and instead of google you put the link. The rest of the subtitles you can make them bolded too, is better for easier reading. And be sure the text is not taken from internet because Cheetah is very vigilent :). Just search it on google if you want to know what is Cheetah. Other than that, I think you're great and i wish you much luck! Oh and regarding tags, they're very important...i suggest you use first your country or location tag and do some research before on steemit to find out which is it, and if you do a longer post and correct and not plagiarized, use ocd-resteem, minnowsupport...feel free to see which tags I use or others and get inspired, and see which one applies to your written subject :).