Poem- Summer Love

in #asapers7 years ago

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Little specks of light seeping through the curtains,
The sky outside brighter than usual,
Over the valleys and the mountains,
Beyond the crystal clear river water so musical,
The night seems livelier than the day,
All scars turn into stardust,
All fears flee away,
All doubts silenced by the gust,
Bodies entwined like pages of book ends,
A raphsody, a tune set to motion,
Heartbeats get faster as darkness descends,
All words put into a single emotion,
The fireflies shine and dance around,
The winter is long gone,
It's time for summer love in this old town,
For it's another new dawn...

-©Pratibha Badgal AA

All the posts under the name Pratibha Badgal AA are my own.

This poem was inspired from One Direction's song "Summer Love." Although the song and my poem are completely different.

Thank you for reading. All kinds of suggestions are welcomed. You can always comment and talk to me:)

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Really enjoy this one. Lovely poem! :)

Very good poetry,,, I am really enjoy read you post

Thank you @azyref. I am glad you like it :)

Truly an amazing piece. Your choice of words is good and cool.

As Summer begins, good time to get into a Summer Love. LOL

It is @cyemela. Thank you for reading :)

Sent u my aloha 🌸 thank u for sharing this beautiful blog. I found your post from our discord group minnow-power 💜

Beautiful sentiment in that poem and wonderfully written!

Thank you @dmcamera 💖💞

You are so welcome!

Thank you @illusions16, this was uplifting to read. Where I grew up, we had long winters without much sun. Spring and summer was always the time of creating something, of being outside, and feeling alive. Whereas winter was always a time of stillness... thanks for this poem, I enjoyed it a lot.
Sam

Your welcome @sams-world. I am glad you liked it. Thank you for your appreciation💙I have never personally liked extreme winter or summer. I love autumn and spring. It's like a combination of both death and life.

yes, you're like me :)))

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