And so, a dialog page, with a very classic left/right layout with both characters going back and forth and finishing with a good large panel (with more text bubbles contained in the large one, to emphasize a beat in the conversation) (LOVE it!) (<3)
It is interesting that Theo dropped the father stuff once he was reminded about the mother figure in Ayse's life... I wonder what's this all about ! Good hook, Sean <3
I also like that the ending of this page really sets up the unveiling for the reasons for the kidnapping :D Really nice~
THANK YOU <3!!!
I'm really glad the page behaves well and that it has a good pace along with the hook.
It's about time we start to reveal a little more information ;D
Aahhh that father background dialogue bit is done so deftly. Just a little tease and then moving on to the current matter. Well done you two. Usually I gush about your art, but the story is no slouch either. And for someone like me who want to make a manga, I believe story crafting is equally important, if not more so than the art :).
A meellion thanks for loving the dialogue ; w; !
It's nice to share this with you guys since we're just figuring stuff out as we go along. I've been trying to pay more attention to layout when I read over comics and learn the various methods of different creators :3c observes other comics from the shadows, taking notes|ω´･;)
And so, a dialog page, with a very classic left/right layout with both characters going back and forth and finishing with a good large panel (with more text bubbles contained in the large one, to emphasize a beat in the conversation) (LOVE it!) (<3)
It is interesting that Theo dropped the father stuff once he was reminded about the mother figure in Ayse's life... I wonder what's this all about ! Good hook, Sean <3
I also like that the ending of this page really sets up the unveiling for the reasons for the kidnapping :D Really nice~
THANK YOU <3!!!
I'm really glad the page behaves well and that it has a good pace along with the hook.
It's about time we start to reveal a little more information ;D
Aahhh that father background dialogue bit is done so deftly. Just a little tease and then moving on to the current matter. Well done you two. Usually I gush about your art, but the story is no slouch either. And for someone like me who want to make a manga, I believe story crafting is equally important, if not more so than the art :).
A meellion thanks for loving the dialogue ; w; !
It's nice to share this with you guys since we're just figuring stuff out as we go along. I've been trying to pay more attention to layout when I read over comics and learn the various methods of different creators :3c
observes other comics from the shadows, taking notes|ω´･;)
Very interesting. I am curious to see how that develops next.
Great work on the graphics and storyline.
We're hoping it develops in an interesting and fun way ;D !
Thank you so much!!!
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